Elaine was
editing my newest work in progress when she suddenly asked, “Why did you have
to name Roger and Suzanne’s son Robert?
Now we have to struggle with remembering a murder victim named Roberta
Roberts and a boy named Robert Bowman in the same novel. It’s confusing!”
All about the South American Mystery novel series, also known as the Roger and Suzanne Mystery series, the practice of writing, guest posts by other mystery writers, and life in South America as a resident and as a tourist. There's also some "stuff" added every now and then.
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Showing posts with label Characters. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Characters. Show all posts
Sunday, August 31, 2014
Wednesday, May 15, 2013
LEFT BRAIN, RIGHT BRAIN
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With a B.S. degree in Chemistry and M.S. and Ph.D. degrees
in Biochemistry it’s a pretty good guess that I’m predominantly left
brained. My wife Elaine is excellent at
all kinds of crafts and is an accomplished weaver. It’s a pretty good guess that she’s
predominantly right brained. We can see
the ‘he’s from Mars and she’s from Venus’ stuff when she edits my
manuscripts. I tend to plot and write
linearly while she craves visual scenes and better realized minor
characters. We had several excellent
examples of this dichotomy in the current WIP, “The Deadly Dog Show”. For example I originally wrote a scene in
Chapter 2 with Roger introducing Suzanne to hot pastrami sandwiches in a
stereotypical New York City Delicatessen as follows.
Thursday, October 25, 2012
Sunday, June 17, 2012
The Three Rs of Book Series Characters: Recycle, Reuse, Resurrect
One
of the decisions that the author of a series has to make is whether or not to
recycle your secondary characters through subsequent books. For green-thinking authors, recycle,
reuse, and resurrect is a natural answer to this question. If you've already invented Joe and
Mary, why start over from scratch the next time? You already know what they look like, what they sound like,
and a little bit about their character.
Who knows, there may be a few Joe and Mary groupies out there who will
buy your next book because they want to know whether Joe got his promised
promotion at work or whether Mary's unborn child from the previous book turned
out to be a boy or a girl. Maybe
Mary can work her way up the literary food chain to star in her own novel some
day.
On
the other hand, recycled characters can easily become boring as they make their
guest appearances in subsequent books.
They really need to be there to advance the story, not just to pad out
the book length by introducing extraneous subplots centered on them. And if they do show up, readers expect
the author to peel away a few more layers of the onion so we get to know them
better, in more depth, in each succeeding appearance. Several months ago I did a guest interview for Pat Bertram's
blog from the point of view of the character Eduardo Gomez, a Paraguayan
policeman who had appeared in my second novel, The Ambivalent Corpse. In that interview, Eduardo indicated
that he wanted to play a bigger part in subsequent books. He gets a chance to do this in my newest novel, due later this summer, The
Matador Murder. And we get a
chance to know him better. There
are still some things we don't really know about him----maybe we'll be seeing
more of him in books to come?
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