The current
Work In Progress reached a milestone.
The first draft of “The Origin of Murder” is complete, I’ve also completed
the first round of edits, and a copy is currently being read by my wife with
her trusty blue pen. I like this new
book, which started with rediscovering Elaine’s journal describing her
impressions of what we saw when we took the cruise through the Galapagos
Islands that Roger, Suzanne, and their entourage take in this current
novel. The plot evolved from the
original idea (which is still the central theme of “Whydunit”), to a much more
complex story as the peripheral characters began clamoring for enhanced
identities and backstories. “Whodunit”
evolved with the novel. Along the way I
ended up doing a lot of research (I’d tell you about what, but that would be a
spoiler) and learned a lot about [CENSORED] and [CENSORED].
As my
supporting cast of characters gets larger and larger, they seem to demand more
and more to do in each book. I’m going
to have to kill off one or two regulars pretty soon just to keep Suzanne’s
traditional role intact. “The Origin of
Murder” gives our Swiss Army Knife of a Nanny, Bruce, a goodly share of the ink
(or, for the purists out there, the electrons) in this story. Eduardo Gomez plays a significant role, and
for the first time ever brings his wife Sophia along to join in the fun. The mysterious General Vincente Aleman, who
sits next to Roger on the flight between Guayaquil and Baltra, is based on a real
general in the Ecuadorian Air Force who sat next to me when we took the same
flight.
The
pitter-patter of not so petite puppy feet is still audible at the Last
house. Elaine fell in love with the
last puppy, now named Ries (short for Riesling wine), who seems to have joined
our pack. Great-Grandma Vinia, Grandma
Jolie, and Mother Schöne embraced Ries, and play with him like three very large
puppies themselves. It’s a great
dynamic---maybe they’ve been starved for male companionship? I can hardly wait to write the blog post the
first time a sexually mature Ries has to deal with being surrounded by two
females in season.
Thanksgiving
featured turkey, side dishes, desserts, friends, and family. The newest addition Sarabella, now three
months old, and all of the other three grandchildren were there, so the entire
immediate family joined us. Mike (our
youngest son) and I watched most of the Detroit Lions versus Green Bay Packers
game, which reminded me of my undergraduate and graduate school days at the
University of Wisconsin. My girlfriend
Jan and her family would host a lovely Thanksgiving dinner for family and
pertinent others like me, with the Packer game an essential part of the
digestion process.
Another
reason to celebrate Thanksgiving here in Northern California was
record-breaking good weather---a high of 71 degrees and bright sunshine on
Thursday. The bad news is we’re in a
drought, but for catching up with leaf raking and picking the remaining
pomegranates from the tree, the glorious blue sky and sunshine were hard to
beat. The last of the pomegranates were
squeezed and frozen as juice or syrup.
The leaves continue to fall. Next
week’s weather forecast includes colder nights and rain. But, in the meantime, it’s still nice.
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